POINTS IMPROVES ON BASED ON THE FEEDBACK
- The titling and typography used is too basic and needs to stand out more. As you can see, I have changed my type on my poster for the names, tagline and the film ratings. I have done this to reflect the tone of the poster I used 'the Candy font on Serif Draw Plus. This type is less basic and less harsh like the others and is a bit more feminine to not only attract a female audience but to depict that the film is for a young audience and I feel that this type is playful almost, and is right for my Drama genre.
- This is a rough edit as I have not finished entirely as there is space to fill but I removed the credits from the head and left it to be central and an iconic image of the trailer. I have made the poster a bit smaller to leave some white space to give the credits it's own space. To do this I re-sized the image and the layers to fit in to a smaller A5 type prototype of the A4 poster film and manually refined all the sizes of the poster and type, even the silhouette, which holds the most attention as it is black against my pastel background and through the manual use of the opacity tool I made the image more transparent to suggest that the character is fading away.
- Too much unused space present in the Poster and I need to work on my positioning. I have reduced the waste of space by increasing the size of the film title and the names above it. Furthermore, I have also re-positioned the "COMING SOON" text to position in in a more conventional and central location within the poster. Additionally, the credits have been slightly enlarged to cover the body of the poster shown rather than just blank space. To reduce the presence of blank space further, I placed a slogan which has been deliberately positioned to resemble typical film posters and I further associated the slogan with the theme of the poster of being a drama and highlighting that there will be a downfall. " Just when you thought you were on cloud 9"
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